Prescriptive Feedback - Student Samples

Students samples are a great way to see the power of Empowering Writers methodology and instruction. Use the samples below for tips on how to assess and improve student writing.

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Firefigther Sample Image
Detail Generating Questions - Grade 1
Martial Arts.Sample Image copy
Informational Writing - Grade 2
Grizzly Sample Image
Response to Text - Grade 3
Humback Whale Sample Image
Constructed Response - Grade 3
Dogs Sample Image copy
Informational Writing - Grade 3
Hamster Sample Image
Informational Process Piece - Grade 3
Pool.Sample Image copy
Informational Writing - Grade 3
Travel.Sample Image copy
Informational Writing - Grade 3
JeanFrancois Sample Image
Response to Text - Grade 4
Horseshoe Crab Sample Image copy
Informational/Expository Process Piece - Grade 4
Cats Informational Sample Image
Opinion Writing - Grade 4
Cheerstation Sample Image
Developing Main Ideas - Grade 4
Japanese New Years Sample Image
Informational Writing - Grade 4
Catalinas Future Sample Image
Response to Text - Grade 5
Grade 5 Beach Sample Image
Informational Writing - Grade 5
Boogie Boarding Sample Image copy
Revise this Narrative Beginning - Grade 4
Frogs in the Pool Sample Image
Narrative Writing - Grade 2
Red Wolves Sample Image copy
Narrative Character/Problem/Solution - Grade 2
Narrative.SoftballGame.Sample Image
Narrative Writing - Grade 3
SnowMonster.Sample Image copy
Narrative Character/Problem/Solution - Grade 3
Polo Sample Image copy
Narrative Extension Task - Grade 4
Shoot.Sample Image copy
Personal Experience Narrative - Grades 4
EWA.Sample Image copy
Narrative Writing - Grade 4
Snowed.Sample Image copy
Personal Experience Narrative - Grade 4
Personal Exp Jason Sample Image
Personal Experience Narrative - Grade 5
Splash Sample Image copy
Narrative Writing - Grade 6
Autumn the Best Time of the Year Image
Opinion Writing - Grade 5
PaloPinto.Sample Image copy
STAAR Released Paper - Opinion Writing - Grade 4
Wow Autumn.Sample Image copy
Opinion Writing - Grade 4
Dog Main Ideas Sample Image
Developing Main Ideas - Grade 4