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Student Writing Samples

 The best way to see what Empowering Writers can do for your students is to look at what our students are able to produce. The following student samples will highlight the ways in which our methodology and materials concretely improve student writing. 

Narrative Student Samples                                  

Sample #1 and #2 were written by the same student, three months apart.   Click the paper to read analyis and more student narrative samples.

 

 

Expository Student Samples & Persuasive Student Samples

This example of expository writing (a process piece) was written by a fourth grade student.  Click the essay to read, analyze and see more expository and persuasive student writing samples.

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Wouldn't you love to regularly see this kind of growth in your students' writing? Teachers benefitting from Empowering Writers training gain the specific strategies and techniques which they skillfully and confidently pass along to their students.

Our wide range of resources and support materials make implementation easy, creative, and fulfilling. Why not see what Empowering Writers can do to improve your students' writing?

Student Writing Samples - Expository and Persuasive

Expository Student Samples - Page 2 A fourth grade student expository writing sample. Note the skills applied by the student. strong organization effective introduction with a lead, topic sentence, and powerful use of informative verbs broad yet distinct main ideas strong supporting details through the use of detail-generati...
More Expository Student Samples

Expository Student Samples 5th Grade Sample May Expository Writing Piece (End of the year) 5th Grade Background: Each marking period, our town does a district-wide writing prompt. That is when all 5th graders in the town of Windsor write on the same topic. Recently, we completed our end-or-the-year writing prompt to have a sc...
Student Writing Samples Analysis-Narrative

Narrative Student Samples - Page 2 Student Writing Samples Analysis - Narrative Writing Here is a second grade student writing sample prior to instruction. This was a required timed assessment, administered at the beginning of second grade. “One day I went to my grandmother’s farm. She asked to milk the cow so I we...
More Narrative Student Samples

Narrative Student Samples 1st Grade Sample after 2 years of Empowering Writers instructions Finish this story. Make it exciting "One Day at the Beach" The waves crashed against the sane. I plopped my pack down and spread out my towel. It was going to be a wonderful day. Just then... “My little brother pulled the towel out...
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